DrJRapp
Well-known member
Just finished the "beta" version of the website for my new business. I'd appreciate feedback...the good, the bad and the ugly
summitflorida.com
summitflorida.com
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TomDac
former MLO owner/operator
Looks really nice and professional, Jerry..
use a mailto link on the contact page so the user can click it and it will open up a new message on their email client. Like you did on the "about us" page...
Or use a form so they can submit something right from the site.
use a mailto link on the contact page so the user can click it and it will open up a new message on their email client. Like you did on the "about us" page...
Or use a form so they can submit something right from the site.
DrJRapp
Well-known member
Thanks for your comments Tom...we will definitly do the mailto link. However I want to avoid the computer based mentality of filling out a form. Our company is all about customer service, not automation. Our audience, association board members, are for the most part in theier 60s and 70s who tend to be slightly computer phobic so we are keeping it "personal" rather than automated.
Can anyone guess how I came up with the company name???????
the first two wrong guesses don't count!
Can anyone guess how I came up with the company name???????
the first two wrong guesses don't count!
Tube60
Well-known member
I agree with Tom on the email links. Nice site overall!
Definitely scratching my head about how you came up with the site name though......:duh:
Definitely scratching my head about how you came up with the site name though......:duh:
Bernard
Well-known member
Nice site, Jerry. Some feedback:
HOME PAGE:
"while all the while remaining cost effective." Remove the first "while"
"you’re" change to "you are" .....sounds more professional
OUR SERVICES PAGE:
"Associations" should have an apostrophe before the last s
ABOUT US PAGE:
"highly talented" and "heavily experienced" should be hyphenated
You need a bigger smile
CONTACT US PAGE:
"challenges of" should be "challenges to"
Am I being too picky ? I used to be the Editor-in-Chief of a technical standards organization, and old habits die hard.
HOME PAGE:
"while all the while remaining cost effective." Remove the first "while"
"you’re" change to "you are" .....sounds more professional
OUR SERVICES PAGE:
"Associations" should have an apostrophe before the last s
ABOUT US PAGE:
"highly talented" and "heavily experienced" should be hyphenated
You need a bigger smile
CONTACT US PAGE:
"challenges of" should be "challenges to"
Am I being too picky ? I used to be the Editor-in-Chief of a technical standards organization, and old habits die hard.
Looks good and simple which is a plus considering your primary audience.
The only suggestions I have are nitpicky:
ABOUT US page:
"of the Communities we represent" contains unnecessary capitalization.
Should be two spaces after a period.
You might want to make your logo in the upper right corner and hyperlink back to the home page.
Should include a link to this website
That's about it. Otherwise, very good.
The only suggestions I have are nitpicky:
ABOUT US page:
"of the Communities we represent" contains unnecessary capitalization.
Should be two spaces after a period.
You might want to make your logo in the upper right corner and hyperlink back to the home page.
Should include a link to this website
That's about it. Otherwise, very good.
I see most of the prior comments have been applied, except that the "....while all the while" should probably be "... all while" (note 3 dots and a space instead 4 dots for the ellipses).
